Quick answer: open with the target role, the employer problem, and one proof point. Avoid broad excitement, company flattery, or a paragraph that could fit any application.
Choose one opening job signal
Start from the strongest requirement in the job description: customer support, growth, analysis, engineering delivery, operations, or stakeholder communication. The opening should not try to summarize your whole resume.
Pair the signal with proof immediately
Use one project, result, work habit, or decision you can defend. A good opening paragraph explains why that proof matters for this employer, not why you are excited in general.
Use AI to tighten, not invent
Ask AI for three versions: concise, proof-led, and warm. Then remove company praise, unsupported metrics, and any sentence that would still work for a different role.
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FAQ
How long should an opening paragraph be?
Two to four sentences is usually enough. If it needs more, the paragraph is probably doing the work of the whole letter.
Should I start with why I love the company?
Only if the reason is specific and verifiable. Most openings are stronger when they start with the role need and your proof.